
Author's Note - Straight from the Chaotic Sibling Headquarters 🐻
Hey baby bears,
How are you doing and what's up?
Here's Chapter One, finally out of the drafts and into your hands!
( kyun aagye padhne )
Grab your popcorn, cold drinks, or chai - whatever fuels your drama-reading soul (and maybe a tissue too... just in case 👀).
AUTHOR'S POV
Mumbai Ranawat
Palace,
The territory of the Ranawat Palace glowed gently under the morning sun.
A hush hung over the mansion, yet the staff were already at work, silently managing their responsibilities.
Each department was handled with expert precision under the supervision of the palace head.
Despite their immense wealth and royal legacy, the Ranawats never treated their staff as outsiders - a small act of kindness that always warmed the hearts of those who served them.
"For the Ranawats, kindness doesn't cost billions... But even if it did, we'd still choose it."
Until you cross a line.
After that incident, though - a few things changed.
The palace itself was grand - unnecessarily luxurious, with 30 floors of old-money opulence.
Meanwhile in Ranawat Gym - Chaos Central
Prithviraj, the eldest, was sweating through his push-ups, hair damp as he roared orders through his Bluetooth headset, arranging everything for the temple rituals.
Aadarsh was also doing push-ups.
Maira, his wife, was on the cycling machine beside him.
Shivaay did push-ups with Riddhi, his wife, sitting on his back, nonchalantly counting his reps like it was her morning coffee ritual.
"That's your quota done, love," she teased.
Aarohi was in her own world, smashing chin-ups like a warrior.
Abhimanyu, ever the surgeon, was focused on crunches. He had returned just after midnight from a 7-hour surgery.
After only 2 hours of sleep, he was back in the gym - because that's how Ranawat's function.
Vihaan was helping Atharv with weights. Well, "helping" was a generous word.
He was basically forcing the lazy bug to lift.
Meanwhile, Raghav and Eklavya were running at beast-mode speed on the treadmill, headphones on, lost in their own battle.
Kavya, dressed in sleek gym gear with a high ponytail, was doing deep squats, focused and strong.
Ishita, mid-burpee, was busy teasing her husband with flirtatious expressions and raised eyebrows.
It was less workout, more slow-motion rom-com.
The only missing one? Aditya.
He never joined them.
Why?Because he had built an exclusive gym on his own floor. Rich kid behavior, certified.
No. he stopped interacting with everyone.
Just as things were going smoothly...
Vihaan yelled across the gym, eyes twitching with frustration,
"Atharv! I'm warning you for the last time - if I hear another peep, I'm smashing this dumbbell over your head!"
Atharv groaned dramatically:
"Bhaiii, it's too heavy, pleaseee!"
(Brotherrr)
Vihaan shot back "Stop behaving like a daily soap heroine, samjha?!"
(Stop acting like a daily soap heroine, got it?!)
Atharv scoffed "At least Anupama didn't suffer this much torture!"
Vihaan rolled his eyes with exaggerated disgust "Yeah right! With that iconic background music and their never-ending neck twirls in slow motion... time stops but the same story continues for five generations! The dumbest female leads in history."
The gym burst into laughter.
Aadarsh added dryly, towel over his shoulder "After four generations, they still can't figure out 'Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai'!"
(What even is this relationship?! )
Shivaay smirked, still pushing:
"And Anupama? She found her third love... for the sixth time... at 60! With an adopted daughter and still 'discovering herself' every six months."
(Kudos to that journey!)
Raghav jumped in with a grin:"Bro, you forgot Sasural Simar Ka!Episode 1-50:Simar cries. Roli cries. Mataji rings a bell.Everything's fine... until a naagin crashes the party.""Then Episodes 51-300?A witch. Then a snake. Then a ghost.Simar saves everyone by cooking halwa and doing aarti in slo-mo." 😑
Eklavya added with mock horror,
"Don't even get me started on Gopi Bahu! That show had no logic.Kokila: 'Who spilled haldi on the floor?!'Rashi: 'Must've been the wind.'Wind: 'Excuse me, what did I do?!'"
Aarohi burst into loud laughter.Kavya looked at them in disbelief at their TV knowledge.Ishita shook her head, amused.
She teased,"You all really do this every morning? All this drama just instead of work?"
Atharv dramatically chimed in, feigning offense: "You forgot the sacred tune!GUYS-DHUM TA-NA TA-NA-TA TA-NA-NAAAA... TA-NA-NA -NA-NAAA...!" Mocked with full melodramatic flair rest we're laughing.
Later on
Atharv let out a loud yawn and flopped on the mat."Why are mornings even legal?!"
Eklavya grumbled, lifting weights like they'd personally insulted him:"Because Dada Sa made them mandatory."
Shivaay, mid-push-up:"No one's stopping you from sleeping forever, Atharv. Be our guest."
Adarsh chuckled, towel slung around his neck:"Just update your will first. I'm taking your gaming console."
Abhimanyu added, not looking up:"And your car.It's wasted on someone who thinks 7am is a crime against humanity."
Vihaan, sipping water like it was royalty's nectar:"You guys talk too much during workouts.No wonder your gains are slower than Aarohi's patience."
Aarohi, pulling her ponytail tighter, glared:"Say one more word and I'll show you gains-through a dumbbell hitting your face."
Kavya walked in last, yawning:"If Nanu calls this bonding time again, I swear I'll bond with my bed instead.
💥 And then... the Dads arrived.Ranveer, Dev, and Rajveer walked in - annoyingly energized.
Ranveer clapped his hands loudly: "Come on, boys! Is this the energy of the mighty Ranawats?!"
Rajveer, with a smirk:"Back in my day, I lifted twice that before tying my shoelaces."
Dev, flexing subtly:"And now your back gives out every time you sneeze."
The younger ones groaned in unison.
Aathrav muttered:
"Can we trade them in for quieter, older dads?"
Shivaay replied, chuckling:
"Or just ban their protein shakes. That should humble them."
The fathers were still mock-fighting and teasing when a sharp voice sliced through the corridor.
"Enough! Stop teasing my grandchildren. They're far better than you oldies!"
Everyone froze.
There she was - Diya Viraj Ranawat, the matriarch. Arms crossed, eyes twinkling with love, but that signature stern expression on her face.
The mighty men stood straighter - like schoolboys caught chewing gum.
"I want everyone ready for aarti in one hour. I don't want anyone late. Got it?"
"Yes, Dadi Sa!" echoed in unison.
(Yes, Grandmother!)
Within minutes, the haveli transformed. Everyone scattered to their respective floors.
Exactly an hour later, as commanded, the entire Ranawat family gathered for the aarti.
It began with the oldest couple-Viraj Singh Ranawat and Diya Viraj Ranawat-leading with calm reverence. They were the spiritual heartbeat of the home. The thali then passed on, generation to generation.
Ranveer Singh Ranawat & Preeti Singh Ranawat
Dev Singh Ranawat & Radhika Dev Ranawat
Rajveer Singh Ranawat & Heer Rajveer Ranawat.
And finally, the third generation stepped forward-eyes closed, hands joined in quiet prayer.
As the aarti concluded, the family moved to the grand living room.
Before anyone could settle, Prithviraj stepped forward. He bent down respectfully, touching the feet of his grandparents-followed one by one by the rest of the grandchildren.
"Khamma Ghani, Dada Sa, Dadi Sa," he greeted softly.
(Greetings, Grandfather, Grandmother.)
They smiled fondly at him."Kush raho," Viraj Singh blessed, resting a weathered
yet affectionate hand on his head.
(Be happy.)
One by one, the remaining grandchildren followed suit, touching the feet of their elders-parents, uncles, and aunts.
"Good morning, Young man ," Radhika teased with a wink.
Warm smiles, tight hugs, affectionate pats-this was the Ranawat way.
And then came her.Bua Sa.(Aunt)
Mahima stepped forward and cupped Prithviraj's face with both hands, her eyes slightly misty.
"You've grown so much, Prithvi... just like your sister would've wanted."
His smile faltered-only for a moment."She always said you'd carry the legacy with heart, not just power," she whispered with a dramatic, melancholic tone only Mahima could pull off.
Prithviraj nodded, his throat tight but his voice steady."I'll never let her down, Bua Sa."(Aunt.)
And with that, the Ranawats sat together-strong in bond, powerful in legacy, and deeply rooted in love.
But just then, as if summoned by memory, a soft voice echoed in Prithviraj's heart-a voice that once filled the haveli halls with sunshine and childish mischief.
--MEMORY--
"Prithvi dada Aap bikul dadda jise banaoge na strogler,grumplie,payrii,and slinet ," she had once declared proudly,she made actions through her hand.
mispronouncing stronger, loving, and silent in her adorable, babbling way.
( Prithvi Dada you'd be just like dadda stronger, grumpy,loving, slient". )
"King!" she had added, puffing her tiny chest, imitating the royal stance of their grandfather.
--END'S--
Around him, light chatter resumed. No one noticed the shift in Prithvi's expression. But Aarohi, who stood beside him, did. She said nothing-just gently rested her hand on his arm.
She knew what he had remembered.
Some silences carry more weight than words. And in that moment of silence, Prithviraj stood a little taller-not because he had to, but because somewhere in the echoes of the haveli, a little girl had once believed he would.
He quietly walked away. No one stopped him. No one questioned it.
His footsteps were silent as he climbed toward the fourth floor-the one no one spoke of.
The one left touched for by only the siblings and cousins thirteen years, eleven months, and thirty days.
Once filled with toys, giggles, scattered crayons, and warm sunlight-the hallway now lay cloaked in stillness. Time had been paused here.
He opened the door slowly. A familiar scent-a mix of lavender and something sweet-enveloped him instantly.
The room was unchanged. Not a frame moved. Not a book misplaced.
He stepped in and his gaze landed on the frame.
There she was-arms flung around his neck, pressing a loud kiss on his cheek as he held her. His expression was proud, protective. Hers was pure joy. To her, he had been the whole world.
He stepped closer, trembling fingers brushing the photo frame.
"Aaj 13 saal... 11 mahine... 25 din ho gaye, Jaana," he whispered, voice thick.
"Itne saal ho gaye tumse baat kiye... tumhari awaaz sune."
(Today it's been 13 years... 11 months... 25 days, Jaana.
It's been so many years since I talked to you... heard your voice.)
His voice cracked.
"Aap humse door chali gayi... hume itne bure lagte the kya?"
(You went away from us... were we that bad?)
He gave a soft, broken chuckle and wiped the tears threatening to fall.
"Aa jaaye na wapas... sabko aapki yaad aati hai..."
(Come back... everyone misses you.)
"Dada sa... woh chup ho gaye hain. Maa-baba har roz aapki photo se baat karte hain... chupke.saare bhai-behen... sab yaad karte hain aapko. Lekin koi kisi se kuch nahi kehta.Sab apne aapko doshi maante hain..."
He leaned against the wall, forehead resting against the frame.
(Grandfather... he has become quiet. Mother and father talk to your photo every day... secretly...All your brothers and sisters... everyone misses you. But no one says anything to anyone,..Everyone blames themselves...)
"Jaana... tarsa diya hai sabko. Ghar khaali lagta hai bina aapke..."
(Jaana... you've made everyone long for you. The house feels empty without you...)
Silence.
Tears threating to well up in his eyes-but he didn't let them.
Because his sister hated tears.
And he had promised her once-never to cry in front of her photo.
But oh, how badly he wanted to.
This room wasn't just a space. It was her. Her laughter. Her scent. Her tantrums. Her royal scribbles. Her little footprints on the balcony tiles.
No staff ever cleaned this room. Only her siblings did.
It had become their silent ritual. Their excuse.To stay close to her.
To pretend she'd be back any second.
His hand brushed over the edge of her study desk-still covered in the faded crayon doodles she called her "Royal Seals." His eyes landed on a stuffed toy-Sheru the Second. Another memory surfaced, vivid and sharp.
Flashback.
He was Nineteen. She was five.
He had lost a family heirloom while protecting her.
Ranveer, his father, had been furious. The first time he ever raised his voice-and hand-at Prithvi.
But what stayed was her.
Tear-streaked, tiny fists clenched, with broken words
"Ap chiinaata na! Karlu huum! Baba se baat karenge!
(You scold, right! I'll do it! I'll talk to father!)
Apko daanta na! Hume bhi unhe daante ge!"
(He scolded you, right! We will scold him too!)
Then she threw herself at him, hugging tightly.
Shaking. Sobbing."Please... appk mat roye na, Dada... I no feele good.(Please... don't cry, dada... I don't feel good.)
" When you smile... I feele good. Please..." Her voice had been a balm to his wounds.
And now, all these years later, it still echoed in the room. In the walls. In his soul.
Prithviraj sank to the floor, folding his knees, arms wrapped around them, head resting against the bed.
And though his eyes burned, he's eyes bruned not with tears but rage.
Because she had asked him not to.And he would never break that promise.After a while, he stood up. Composed.
The quiet creak of the door stirred the stillness.
Shivay stepped in first, his movements slow and reverent-like someone entering a temple. Behind him, Aarohi followed, her gaze softening instantly as it landed on her elder brother seated beside the bed.
Adarsh was the last to enter, shutting the door gently behind him, as if shielding the moment from the world outside.
None of them spoke.They didn't need to.
They knew him-truly knew him. The protector. The rock. The one who wore silence like armor. But here, in this sacred space, the armor had dents. Cracks. Memories.
Jaana wasn't just a sister to Prithviraj. She was something else entirely-a piece of his soul in the form of a little girl.
He had held her like a daughter, loved her with a fierceness even their parents admired quietly. And now, without her, it felt like half of him still stood in this room... waiting.
Aarohi sat beside him, gently resting her head on his shoulder. No words. Just presence.
Adarsh knelt near the bookshelf, pulling out one of her favorite fairy tale books. He ran his fingers across the worn cover.
"She used to call this one her 'Queen's Manual,' remember?"
Shivay let out a faint smile. "And forced us to play roles-Adarsh was always the dragon."
Aarohi chuckled softly, "You still are, honestly."
Prithviraj didn't say anything. But his lips lifted slightly-just enough for them to know he was feeling it all.
"Bhai," Shivay finally said, sitting across from him, "she didn't like tears. But she loved it when you smiled after her hugs. Remember what she used to say?"
(Brother,)
Prithvi closed his eyes for a second, then murmured, voice low but steady,
"Dada's smile is magic... it makes my boo-boos go away."
Aarohi held his hand tightly.
"You were her whole world, bhai," she said. "Still are."
(brother,)
He nodded, eyes glinting but dry.
"I just wish," he whispered, "she could see that we're still here. Still holding on. Still... hers."
Shivay placed a hand on his shoulder.
"She does, bhai. That's why this room feels the way it does. Like she never left."
(brother.)
The door creaked open again-a little firmer this time.
Raghav stepped in.
He hadn't even made it to his room. Something had pulled him here first. Someone.
His chest tightened.
He hadn't been here in months. He avoided this floor, this room-because the guilt, the ache, it hit too hard. But not today.
Not when he knew his elder brother would come here after the aarti.
Raghav had always known.
He took a slow step inside, gaze drifting to the framed photo above the bed. His heartbeat faltered.
Muffin.
The light in her eyes. That unfiltered joy as she kissed Prithvi's cheek. Her tiny arms wrapped around him like a whirlwind of love.
Raghav didn't say a word.Then softly:"She knows I always am."
They all knew what he meant-regret, guilt, longing.
That earned a faint chuckle from Adarsh, and even Prithviraj shook his head with a breath of warmth.
It was strange-how the happiest room in the haveli was also the one that made them feel most alive.
Most together.
Raghav pulled out a tiny globe from his jacket pocket and placed it gently on the side table.
A ballerina inside spun slowly when he shook it. It shimmered-like dreams in a glass world.
"She would've danced with it," Aarohi whispered.
Raghav smiled faintly. "And told Shivay not to break it like the last one."
"Hey," Shivay defended, "that was not me. That was Eklavya!"
They all laughed-soft, real. For a moment, Naintara's presence wasn't just a memory. She was there.
One by one, the room began to fill.
Adhiraj entered next, mischief still in his eyes but left at the door. He sat near Aarohi, unusually silent.
Eklavya and Vihaan followed, both subdued. Eklavya traced the edge of Munchkin's bookshelf like it was holy.
Vihaan placed a soft toy tiger on her bed.
"I told you it's yours... even when you stole it."
Abhimanyu and Atharv arrived-Abhi with hands in pockets, Atharv with a crumpled drawing she'd once gifted him, carried like treasure.
They didn't speak. They just belonged. The room called them home.
They each took a corner of the room, forming a quiet, protective circle around her space.
No one dared break the stillness. But each presence added something-like their pieces of Jaana were returning to her.
But still... one person hadn't come.
Kavya.
Her absence had gone unnoticed-but not unfelt.
Footsteps echoed in the hall.
She never cried for Naintara. Not because she didn't want to. But because she hated pretending.
And Kavya-every single day since-tried to be the sunshine.
She stepped in and moved to the center of the room, sitting cross-legged on the floor. She pulled out a tiny beaded bracelet from her pocket-Naintara's favorite one.
The room filled-not with noise, not with sorrow. But presence. Of a girl who no longer stood among them... and yet, had never truly left.
Each held something that belonged to her.
A drawing.
A soft toy.
A bracelet.
A ribbon.
A story.
A memory.
A moment.
Nine hearts. One ache.Their voices didn't tremble.
It wasn't a cry.
It was a promise.They didn't shut the door.She didn't like it shut.
The Breakfast Hall
Downstairs, the aroma of fresh parathas, ghee-soaked halwa, and spiced tea filled the air.
The Ranawat dining hall wasn't just large-it was alive. Two massive tables stretched end to end, laid with silver thalis and copper jugs. The cooks, guided by Diya Dadi, had outdone themselves.
The chatter rose-playful, chaotic, comforting.
Raghav groaned, "If I eat one more aloo paratha, I'm going to explode."
"Toh diet pe chal ja," Eklavya quipped, stuffing his mouth with kachori.
(Then go on a diet.)
"Tu khud gym theek se kar hi nahi raha hai!" Aadhiraj snapped.
(You yourself aren't even working out properly at the gym!)
"Children," Rajveer warned, flipping his newspaper with one eyebrow raised, "Ek din ke liye bhi shaant nahi reh sakte kya?"
(Can't you be quiet for even one day?)
"Arey Kaka sa," Shivay smirked, "yeh toh shaanti hai hamare yahaan."
(Oh Uncle, this is peace for us.)
Kavya leaned toward Aarohi, whispering, "Watch. In ten seconds someone's going to complain about halwa."
Right on cue, Atharv frowned.
"Dadi! Thoda kam meetha dala karo... sugar se darr nahi lagta kya?"
(Grandmother! Put a little less sugar... aren't you afraid of sugar?)
Diya ji narrowed her eyes.
"Tu jab meetha tha, tab toh kisi ko problem nahi thi. Ab halwa mein problem ho gayi?"
(When you were sweet, no one had a problem. Now there's a problem with halwa?)
The hall burst into laughter.
Even Ranveer, Dev, and Rajveer-the pillars of the family-chuckled at the chaos they'd raised.
Then Ranveer stood, quieting the room.
"Aaj shaam ko hum sab mandir jaane wale hain. Sab ko pata hai... toh on time, no drama."
(This evening, we are all going to the temple. Everyone knows... so be on time, no drama.)
Dev added with a fond smile,
"Aur aaj mandir mein special pooja rakhi gayi hai. Not just for her..."
(And today, a special puja has been arranged in the temple.)
Rajveer, eyes soft:
"...but for her happiness."
Everyone exchanged glances. Quiet. Receiving the message. No one spoke.
They didn't have to.
Later The Convoy to the Temple
Soon, everyone left in their respective cars-Z+ security following behind like a silent wall.
Prithviraj drove, Ishita by his side, with Atharv and Eklavya in the back.
Aatharv grinned, "Bhai, agar hum mandir ke raste mein alien mil jaye toh kya karenge?"
(Brother, if we meet an alien on the way to the temple, what will we do?)
Prithvi, deadpaned 5G "Usey tujhse milwa denge. Shayad usse bhi headache ho."
(I'll introduce him to you. Maybe he'll get a headache too.)
Eklavya and Ishita choked trying not to laugh.
Atharv continued, "Aur agar alien vegetarian nikla toh?"
(And if the alien turns out to be vegetarian?)
Prithvi sighed, "Toh use Dadi ke haath ka halwa khila denge. Tab tak woh Earth chhod ke bhaag chuka hoga."
(Then we'll feed him halwa made by Grandmother. By then, he would have fled Earth.)
Adarsh drove with Meher, while Aarohi and Abhimanyu sat behind.
Ranveer, Preeti, Diya ji, and Viraj ji shared a car, seated like royalty.
Dev drove with Radhika, while Rajveer and Heer occupied the back.
Raghav drove with Vihaan, and Kavya and Adhiraj in the backseat, arguing about which playlist to play.
Time skip to temple.
The entire Ranawat clan, dressed in soft pastels, saffron, and cream, arrived at the ancient family temple at the estate's edge. Carved in white sandstone, it stood timeless, the bells echoing into the soul.
The air was thick with rose petals, sandalwood, and sacred chants.
Ranveer and Preeti sat at the center of the havan kund, flanked by Viraj ji and Diya ji, holding hands during the mantra jaap. The cousins formed a tight circle around them, eyes closed in shared prayer.
Every diya flickered with the same quiet plea-peace. strength. healing.
After puja completed.
Atharv slipped to the back of the temple, eyes searching the sky. Leaning towards on the railing of back temple
He just needed a moment. The emotions were too high, the memories too loud.This place... it still smelled like her laughter.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Author's Note - Reporting Live from the Chaos Headquarters
Phew! Another day in the Ranawat Palace and we've barely scratched the surface of their madness.
On serious note :
While writing this chapter... something strange happened it's for me because I don't cry easily.
Anokha sa paani hi aaya aankhon mein-unexpected, raw, but real.
It took me 4-5 rewrites, multiple versions, and a lot of sitting with the emotions behind every line.
At one point, I wasn't sure if it would ever come together.
But in the end... it did. And it was worth every second.
If you felt even a fraction of what I did-thank you for reading with your heart.
The story's just getting deeper now... stay with me.
I know it was a bit lengthy, but that’s only because I didn’t want to drag the chapters out by making it two parts. It’s not like I’m not going to give you the details—I just wanted to introduce everyone in one chapter. Except Aditya… I know he deserves a special entry, so maybe in the next chapter. Don’t worry, every sibling will have their own special chapter, and the bonding and emotional parts are definitely going to be tough on you—so be ready with tissues! The next chapter won’t be too loud, but let’s just say it might get a little wild. After that… I’m not giving away anything.
Let me know if want couple moments.
Anyway, hope you survived the drama without too much emotional damage. Drink something you prefer, send love's to the Ranawat siblings, and drop your fav moment below (yes, even if it was Mahima's villain walk 👀).
PS: If you think this chapter was chaotic... wait till the next one. Buckle up, buttercup 😌💅
Love, your drama dealer.


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